The Dialogues of Time and Entropy
by Aryeh Lev Stollman ISBN: 1573222356
Post Your Opinion | | A Sharp Tooth in the Fur by Ibolya KaslikDarryl Whetter's "A Sharp Tooth in the Fur" presents a
puzzling and intriguing glimpse into the male psyche. Whetter's
stories explore responsibility, violence, ownership, marital
separation, drugs, academia, adolescence, and sex.
Self-deprecatory and ironic to a fault, Whetter's characters are
either middle-aged males, who happen to be teachers or academics,
or adolescent boys pushing themselves to physical extremes. The
grown men appear stranded between adulthood and extended adolescence.
These men cope with their adult responsibilities and dilemmas in
puerile ways. In "Profanity Issue S.", for example, a
recent Ph D. graduate pickets his son's school when his son is
reprimanded for swearing. In the title story, "A Sharp Tooth
in the Fur", a bright undergraduate student redefines a
relationship with an ex-girlfriend by buying her sexy clothes only
to return them later to pick up salesgirls. In "Kermit is
Smut", a kindergarten teacher imagines the former lives of his
students while mitigating the pain of his divorce by smoking pot
and cranking up the heat. An adolescent boy scratches words in his
reptilian skin to transmit his misery in "Sitting Up"
while a young undergrad negotiates tear gas and activism in
"Non-Violent, Not OK". In "Enormous Sky White"
we meet another young male, Grater, a tree-planter who succumbs to
the raw sexuality of a fellow planter while his girlfriend who is
away in France is also unfaithful to him. In "Walls not Thick
Enough"-the only story featuring a female character- a Superstore
cashier named Lorna develops a crush on a well-dressed customer.
Lorna decides the object of her affection is a professional as
"In Fredericton, only lawyers wear suits." The last two
stories, "Grey Hound" and "Him Not Me", stray
from Whetter's theme of broken relationships, budding sexual exploits,
and feckless men, and are perhaps the least self-conscious
stylistically. In these last two stories a young boy must cope with
the taxing adult responsibility of being the primary caregiver of
his incapacitated father.
Whetter's stories are quippy, clever and definitely capture a
generation caught between adult responsibility and teenage
dissoluteness. Whetter's cynical and humourous portrayal of the
complexities of modern relationships is compelling though, at times,
one-dimensional as upwardly mobile women-who all wear dry-clean
only' suits-leave their men in three out of three of the break-up
stories. There are also stories in which Whetter's cleverness
simply overwhelms the reader. Many of the stories begin in the
middle: they plunge the reader into an oddly described scene and
then retrace the narrative. While this can be an interesting
technique, coupled with Whetter's shorthand style and snappy dialogue,
it renders some of the stories somewhat cryptic. Also, occasionally
Whetter's dialogue seems contrived.
There is no doubt that Whetter is an excellent writer, skilled at
capturing minutia and investing it with meaning. He writes about
arduous physical suffering and the to and fro of sexual ecstasy in
an electric way, but it would be interesting to see Whetter do away
with some of the irony, self-consciousness and cleverness, in order
to bring out more effectively the rawness of his subjects and themes.
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